Hey its cool!
Its ok! :)
Hey its cool!
Its ok! :)
Wow.
The movie was awesome because:
-Style is just UUBBEERR cool.
-Voice was awesome.
Things to do:
-Add stop() and replay button.
Only thing i didn't like is its an AD.
Hey its cool
Things you did well:
-Animation was pretty good
-Voice was awesome.
Things you need to improve on:
-Humor. I didn't laugh a bit(Oh but maybe its just me)
Well i give 8/10 to this movie and it was pretty cool,
You have got talent.
Things you did well:
-Awesome art style(I cant believe its your first one ^_^)
-Sound and Music quality suprised me!
-For first time it really suprised me nobody
has got such great first movies. How old are you?
Things you need to add in the future:
- A preloader you can get here ( http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/ )
-More music or voice acting because its not so cool to hear nothing
-Oh yeah and voice acting i already mentioned.
But actually i loved to see more from you.
It was really cool. :)
I think thats a really nice short film.
One problem only-Bird sound messed up. :D
But still really cool.
5/5
10/10
I always have trouble with good crow sounds. Glad you liked it though.
Rating
Why i didnt give 10
-You coudl voice act
-You coudl make a stop frame and replay button
-You coudl make stopAllSounds action
Things you did well:
+It had a story
+Sprites were used good
+Music was added well
It is...
Awesome!
Age 35, Male
Student
Latvia
Joined on 11/26/09